Borathea Draft 4

Hey guys! These are a few chapters from the 4th draft of Borathea. I’ve been working on it for a while now, and I’m hoping to publish soon, so if ya’ll have any feedback, I’d appreciate it! Chapter 11 Eloise was a Black Seraph, which meant if there was ever an emergency in her guild, they dealt with it quickly and calmly. But she was in the midst of an army of three hundred, so she expected the worst— panicking young soldiers, senior officers barking orders, and Rook yelling for everyone to calm down. What she didn’t expect was ten There’s more!!